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marilyn manson—in the shadow of the valley of death
We have no future
我们没有未来
Heaven wasn't made for me
被天堂拒之门外
We burn ourselves to hell
在地狱中备受煎熬
As fast as it can be
竭尽全力的迅速的燃烧
And i wish that i could be a king
但我却想要成为国王
Then i'd know that i am not alone
我知道我不是独自一人
Maggots put on shirts
恶心的驱虫衣冠楚楚
Sell each others shit
互相贩卖着他们扯淡的思想
Sometimes i feel so worthless
有时候我觉得自己一无是处
Sometimes i feel discarded
有时候我觉得自己已被抛弃
I wish that i was good enough
我希望我已经足够好
Then i'd know that i am not alone
我知道我不是独自一人
Death is po1iceman
死亡是冷漠的jing官
Death is the priest
死亡是和蔼的神父
Death is the stereo
死亡其实无处不在(stereo,立体,为什么会翻译成无处不在是因为立体声、环绕音这些东西我会乱说?)
Death is a tv
死神是一台电视机
Death is the tarot
死亡是无用的塔罗牌
Death is an angel and
死亡是天使,其实
Death is our god
死亡是我们的上帝
Killing us all
我们必死无疑
She puts the seeds in me
她在我的身体里埋下一粒种子
Plant this dying tree
生长成一棵早已枯萎死亡的树
She's a burning string
她是正在被燃烧焚毁的希望(她是正在被燃烧焚毁的绳索,绳索可以在最后时刻救人于水火,所以可以代表希望,我是这么理解的,而且很多人都这么翻译吧= =+)
And i'm just the ashes
而我注定只是渺小的灰烬
一边看着以前别人的翻译,一边把个别的词查了查看看有没有别的含义,自己重新写了一篇翻译,个别的地方加上了无关紧要的形容词,只是为了看上去能饱满一些吧= =+


IP属地:浙江1楼2013-06-23 12:00回复
    marilyn manson—They Said That Hell's Not Hot
    I kill myself in small amounts
    我杀死了我自己
    in each relationship it's not about love.
    与爱情没有任何关系(直接翻译的话在每一个与爱无关的联系里)
    Just another funeral and just another girl left in tears.
    这是另外一场葬礼,和另外一个含泪离去的女孩
    And I'm waiting
    我一直在等待
    with the sound turned off
    和那被悄然关闭的声音
    I'm waiting
    我一直在等待
    like a glass balloon
    像水晶球一般
    and I'm fading into the void
    我在一片空白中慢慢凋零(我在什么也没有的地方凋谢,我在空无一物的地方凋零啥的都行)
    and then I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone...
    然后我离开了,我走了,我走了... ...
    They said that hell's not hot
    他们说地狱并没有想象中的那般炎热
    They said that hell's not hot
    他们说地狱并没有想象中的那般炎热
    I gave my soul to someone else
    我把自己的灵魂出卖给了其他人
    she must have known that
    她必然会知道
    it was already sold.
    我的灵魂已经被出卖
    It was never about her,
    它永远也不会属于她
    it was about the hurt.
    它已经被伤害(它与伤害有关)
    I'm waiting
    我一直在等待
    like a glass balloon
    像水晶球一般
    and I'm fading
    我正在凋零
    into the void
    在一片空白之中
    and then I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone...
    然后我离开了,我走了,我走了...
    They said that hell's not hot
    他们说地狱并没有想象中的那般炎热
    They said that hell's not hot
    他们说地狱并没有想象中的那般炎热
    I kill myself in small amounts
    我杀死了我自己
    in each relationship it's not about love.
    与爱情没有任何关系
    Just another funeral and
    这是另外一场葬礼
    just another girl left in tears.
    和另外一个含泪离去的女孩
    And I'm waiting
    我一直在等待
    with the sound turned off
    和被悄然关掉的声音
    I'm waiting
    我一直在等待
    like a glass balloon
    像水晶球一般
    and I'm fading
    我在凋谢
    into the void and then
    在一片空白之中
    and then I'm gone, I'm gone, I'm gone...
    然后我离开了,我走了,我走了...
    They said that hell's not hot
    他们说地狱并没有想象中的那般炎热
    They said that hell's not hot
    他们说地狱并没有想象中的那般炎热
    这歌讲了些什么不知道,没有MV,没有创作背景,唉


    IP属地:浙江2楼2013-06-23 12:23
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      Hurts-Somebody To Die For
      I could drag you from the ocean
      我尽力将你扯出茫茫无尽的苦海
      I could pull you from the fire
      努力地将你从燃烧的烈焰中救出
      And when you're standing in the shadows
      在你已经被黑暗吞噬的时候
      I could open up the sky
      我为你承担起一片天空
      And I could give you my devotion
      愿意为你付出我所有最真诚的的爱
      Until the end of time
      直到时间的尽头
      And you will never be forgotten
      你无时无刻不萦绕在我的脑海之中
      With me by your side
      我想陪伴在你的身边
      And I don't need this life
      我不想要这样的生活
      I just need…
      我只是希望(我只是需要,翻译成希望会更好些吧)
      Somebody to die for
      有人让我可以为之义无反顾
      Somebody to cry for
      有人让我可以为之悲伤的嘶吼
      When I'm lonely
      可我还是如此的孤独
      When I'm standing in the fire
      每当我在烈火之中无力的挣扎
      I will look him in the eye
      我想要直视他的眼睛
      And I will let the devil know that
      或许连魔鬼也早已明白
      I was brave enough to die
      我已经不再畏惧死亡
      And there's no hell that he can show me
      他告诉我这世间并不存在所谓的地狱
      That's deeper than my pride
      我那早已被严重伤害的尊严与骄傲
      Cause I will never be forgotten
      因此我永生难忘
      Forever I'll fight
      也许我会永远的抗争
      And I don't need this life
      但这并不是我想要的生活
      I just need…
      我只是希望
      Somebody to die for
      有人让我可以为之义无反顾
      Somebody to cry for
      有人让我可以为之悲伤的嘶吼
      When I'm lonely
      可我还是如此的孤独
      And I don't need this life
      但这并不是我想要的生活
      I just need…
      我只是希望
      Somebody to die for
      有人让我可以为之义无反顾
      Somebody to cry for
      有人让我可以为之悲伤的嘶吼
      When I'm lonely
      可我还是如此的孤独
      Don't go gentle into that good night
      希望不会有任何东西来破坏这温和的美好的夜晚
      Rage on against the dying light
      愤怒的对着垂死的光芒(这句是什么谁来告诉我,我想了半天都不知道到底应该怎么翻译= =+)


      IP属地:浙江3楼2013-06-23 12:55
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        第一个翻译里有个错误,死神,应该是死亡


        IP属地:浙江来自Android客户端4楼2013-06-23 16:36
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          好厉害的样子


          IP属地:山东来自iPhone客户端5楼2013-06-23 19:58
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            老婆好厉害


            来自Android客户端6楼2013-07-06 19:54
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              Hurts—Some kind of heaven
              I am ready for the rapture 我已经做好了彻夜狂欢的准备
              I am reaching for the light 我正企图抓住那仅剩的光芒
              But my heart screams hallelujah
              When I hear your battle cry
              然而当听到你的号角
              我跳动的心脏便开始高唱圣歌
              Yeah, yeah
              I know we're so young 我知道也许我们太过年轻
              But I swear you're the one for me 但我已认定你就是只属于我的那个人
              Yeah, yeah
              I knew it right from the start 对此我一直深信不疑
              You're some kind of heaven 你让我置身于天堂,不能自拔
              That's all that I need 那就是我想要的感觉
              I found it in you 就是源自于你
              I found it in you 就是存在与于你
              You're some kind of heaven 你让我沉溺于天堂,醉生梦死
              That's all that I need 那就是我想要的感觉
              I found it in you 就是源自于你
              Too good to be true 无与伦比,妙不可言
              You've got me singing baby 亲爱的,你让我情不自禁的大声歌唱
              Do-do-do-do-do
              Do-do-do-do-do-do
              Do-do-do-do-do
              Do-do-do-do-do-do
              I don't need a god to tell me that I'm wrong 我不需要上帝来宣判我的罪过
              I don't need hell to make me scared of love 我不需要地狱来阻止我狂热的爱
              I don't need a symphony to sing my song 我也不需要交响乐团来演奏我的情歌
              'Cause there's a choir of angels deep inside my lungs 因为我的内心深处早已存在着天使的唱诗班
              And I can hear them sing 我感受到了他们圣洁的声音,沉醉其中
              Yeah, yeah
              Can you hear them sing? 你能听到他们吗?
              Yeah, yeah
              I knew it right from the start 对此我一直深信不疑
              You're some kind of heaven 你就是我的所有梦想
              That's all that I need 那就是我想要的一切
              I found it in you 都是因为你
              I found it in you 都是为了你
              You're some kind of heaven 你就是我的心之所属
              That's all that I need 那就是我想要的归宿
              I found it in you 都是来自于你
              Too good to be true 太过美妙,纸碎金迷
              You've got me singing baby 亲爱的,你让我放声歌唱
              Do-do-do-do-do
              Do-do-do-do-do-do
              Do-do-do-do-do
              Do-do-do-do-do-do
              I know when we're together 我知道当我们在一起时
              My setting sun will shine 我垂死的生命也将重现光彩
              Let's spend this night together 让我们共度这美景良宵
              Let me make you mine 你将被我占有
              It's some kind of这简直
              It's some kind of, it's some kind of 这就是人间天堂,令我神迷意乱
              It's some kind of heaven 这就是极乐
              I knew it right from the start 我从开始便对此深信不疑
              You're some kind of heaven 是你令我置身天堂
              That's all that I need 这就是我想要的感觉
              I found it in you 都是源自于你
              I found it in you 都是存在于你
              Too good to be true 简直无法相信
              You've got me singing baby 你令我放声歌唱,宝贝
              Yeah, yeah
              Oh my love, oh my love
              Yeah, yeah Oh my love
              Yeah
              Some kind of heaven
              It's some kind of, it's some kind of
              It's some kind of
              It's some kind of heaven


              IP属地:浙江7楼2015-06-28 20:58
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