The night of London.
Just like a invisible hand, which pulled a far velvet of that mysterious sky, darkness covered the whole world. Only a few stars shined on the black ground.
The city under that darkness, full of mystery, too.
"Why were you suspicious of me! "the man asked calmly. But his shaking hands betrayed him.
"DNA technology and careless clear-up work."I said quietly.
"Excuse me?"
"DEOXYRIBONUCLEIC ACID AS WELL AS CARELESS CLEAN-UP WORK! " I repeated, much more slowly and clearly. It seems that he is confused.
Um, obviously, he is.
I continued my inference. "After a short but bitter quarrel, you lost your mind, than suddenly leaped up at her, then strangled her. Things goes fast, but she did have a little time to react. She scratched you, huh? Do you think that made only a scratch and it is enough if only covered by a watch?" I came up to him, pull off his watch. A long reddish scratch come into the policemen's and my sight.
"That's all?" he still tried to hide his fear.
"Nope. Even more. A scratch usually accompanies by some DNA evidences."
"What?"
"Which means, your biological sample left in her nail!"
Just like a heavy blow on his head, Carter Sharp, the suspect, fall back to his seat.
I stared at him.
"I just want to ask one question. Why did you do that?" I asked him.
He drew a sigh, leaned forward, and hid his face behind his hands.
Then he started to talk.
"She broke in my life. It's her who made my family fragmented and unstable. I divorced for her, but she fell in love with others, and cuckolded me! As you see, my business are skyrocketing now, because my client regard me as...Oh...Sorry..." he started to sob, that evolved quickly: he couldn't help to cry.
I didn't know how to comfort him.
Every family has a skeleton in the cupboard, huh.
Sharp in businesses but not sharp enough in families. Poor guy. Too extreme is not good for anyone.
Make my eyes look out of the window. Like a flash of lightning, the meteor shot across the sky.

以下是翻译

伦敦的夜。
就像一直无形的手，拉着一条长长的黑色天鹅绒，让黑暗隐藏了大部分那神秘的天空。只有几颗星星，在黑色的幕布上闪耀。
在那片黑暗下的城市，也充满了神秘。
“你为什么怀疑我！”男人镇定的说。但是他颤抖的双手出卖了他。
“DNA技术和疏忽大意的清理工作。”我平静的说。
“对不起？”
“脱氧核糖核酸和疏忽大意的清理工作！”我重复道，更加慢速清楚地说出了这句话。看来他已经不明所以了。
嗯，显而易见，他的确晕了。
我继续我的推理。“在一次短暂而又激烈的争吵后，你丧失了理智，接着扑向了她，掐住了她的脖子。事情发展得很快，她确实有那么一点点时间作出反应。她抓了你，嗯？你是觉得那只留下一道用一块手表就能掩盖的抓痕么？”我走到他面前，拉下了他的表。一道长长的泛红的抓痕出现在警察们和我的眼前。
“没了？”他仍然试图隐藏他的恐惧。
“不。还有更多。一道抓痕通常伴随着一些DNA证据。”
“什么？”
“这就意味着，你的生物样本留在了她的指甲里！”
就像一记重拳打在脑袋上，卡特·夏普，跌回了他的椅子里。
我盯着他。
“我只问你一个问题。你为什么要这样做？”我问他。
他长长地叹了一口气。向前倾斜身子，双手捂住了脸。
“她闯入了我的生活。就是她让我的家庭支离破碎风雨飘摇。我为了她和我老婆离了婚，但她又爱上了别人，给我戴绿帽子！就像你所看到的，我的事业越来越差，因为我的客户认为我是……噢……抱歉……
他开始抽泣，那发展得很快：他忍不住哭了起来。
我不知道如何安慰他。家家都有本难念的经，说的就是这个道理。
在事业上足够敏锐，却在家庭的生活中不够精明。可怜的人。太极端对任何人都不太好。【注：夏普（Sharp）在英文中有“敏锐、精明”的意思】
眼睛转向窗外。就像一道闪电，一颗流星划过天空。

啊啦发完了w剩下的文章稍后公布w
先来艾特@小雪人的信 @宫野久樱

嘣！

Chapter2
警视厅的会议室，坐满了警察。一旁的角落里，站着两个年轻人。警官们正分析着那段录音，我偏过头，小声地问探：“你觉得这是怎么回事？”
“消音手枪。杀人的是女人。”他说道。
“何以见得？”
“那声闷响”
“你怎么那么确定呢？”
“那声闷响，只能是钝器或者是消音手枪。首先，如果你是可怜的受害者，被狠狠的砸了一下，那么大的动作，你会不躲么？其次，能一下子被打死，用钝器的力度和出手速度要有多快？开门的时候，有一声金属敲在地面上的声音，那应该是女人的高跟鞋吧。一个女人的出手速度能有多快？再说了，你计划好了杀人，一定会拿个尖锐物品吧，为什么要拿钝器？拿钝器的很多都是冲动杀人的，抄起旁边的东西就砸上去了，所以一定是个女人拿着枪。”
“可是，计划好杀人的也可能是钝器啊！记得七槻小姐吗？”
“呃......”
“你到底是怎么知道的？”
他笑了起来：“其实我看过父亲桌上的尸检报告。”

Chapter5
一道影子挥过，一声重击，加藤友奈手里的毒’药瓶子应声落地，在地上摔了个粉碎。加藤惊’愕的瞪着我，顾不上揉被狠狠的踢了一脚的手腕。
我落下脚。“作为一个侦探，我是不会让罪犯畏‘罪自’杀的。为了报仇如此有担当的你，为什么如此害怕定‘罪呢！父辈的仇‘恨，为什么要带到孩子们的身上！你要为了父亲报仇，可以，你可以选择重新来过，自己把加藤电器公司抬到第一的席位，而不是剥‘夺中村广美的生’命！广美小姐如此信任你，把你当作最好的朋友，甚至要把公司股份分给你，你却杀’了她！这是多么愚‘蠢的行为！”
加藤笑了笑，眼里闪过泪光。这是发自内心的笑。“或许你说的对。我是心计太深了。我去领我该受的惩罚吧。”她起了身，在两位警察的陪伴下，走向了出口。“我该去接受审判了。”
我和探对视了几秒，他笑了笑。“这个案子，就这么破了？”他说。
“可不是吗.....”我转过头去不看他，望着窗外黑漆漆的天空，笑了起来。
突然，我像触了电一样，跳起来拉着探就往回跑。
“干什么！一惊一乍的！又怎么了！”白马探的声音盖过了晚上的呼呼风声。
“我作业还没写呢！”我大笑道。

……英文版让我吓尿了

英文版同样吓尿

没看清还以为只有英文版

Well, the beginning is absolutely virtuous and amazing, also attracts me to continue reading your novel
Unluckily, this novel is not whole English, this is the only one thing which definitly makes so disappointed, but still well done. Cheer up for your handworking and please keep going.
have a great day LOL
- Lilly

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那个是自戏嘛？omo，我怎么感觉，像自述？这儿同混语c圈儿名路巷南人帅不狗可约戏但这儿渣要约你控戏。

阿拉，你也开始写文了嘛ヽ(ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾉ加油