[160614]【S.S.】Writing's On The Wall 试译

我曾途经此地
却总沉沙折戟
此生颠沛流离
时时天涯浪迹
见君心生欢喜
惟愿相伴相依
我已厉兵秣马
素来弹无虚发
奈何风暴将至
结果犹未可知
既已置之死地
唯有一鼓作气
若我孤注一掷
君可为我护持？
何以偷生？何以呼吸？
不见君面，倍感窒息
爱如潮水，永不止息
任我流连，前功尽弃
为君甘冒奇险
只因恶兆已现
万千记忆碎片
迫使昨日重现
宛如群星璀璨
映照灯火阑珊
希望逐渐粉碎
当知我将无畏
若我孤注一掷
君可为我护持？
何以偷生？何以呼吸？
不见君面，倍感窒息
爱如潮水，永不止息
任我流连，前功尽弃
为君甘冒奇险
只因恶兆已现
恶兆已现
何以偷生？何以呼吸？
不见君面，倍感窒息
爱如潮水，永不止息
任我流连，前功尽弃
何以偷生？何以呼吸？
不见君面，倍感窒息
爱如潮水，永不止息
任我流连，前功尽弃
为君甘冒奇险
只因恶兆已现

［歌词原文］
I've been here before
But always hit the floor
I've spent a lifetime running
And I always get away
But with you I'm feeling something
That makes me want to stay
I'm prepared for this
I never shoot to miss
But I feel like a storm is coming
If I'm gonna make it through the day
Then there's no more use in running
This is something I gotta face
If I risk it all
Could you break my fall?
How do I live? How do I breathe?
When you're not here I'm suffocating
I want to feel love, run through my blood
Tell me is this where I give it all up?
For you I have to risk it all
Cause the writing's on the wall
A million shards of glass
That haunt me from my past
As the stars begin to gather
And the light begins to fade
When all hope begins to shatter
Know that I won't be afraid
If I risk it all
Could you break my fall?
How do I live? How do I breathe?
When you're not here I'm suffocating
I want to feel love, run through my blood
Tell me is this where I give it all up?
For you I have to risk it all
Cause the writing's on the wall
The writing's on the wall
How do I live? How do I breathe?
When you're not here I'm suffocating
I want to feel love, run through my blood
Tell me is this where I give it all up?
How do I live? How do I breathe?
When you're not here I'm suffocating
I want to feel love, run through my blood
Tell me is this where I give it all up?
For you I have to risk it all
Cause the writing's on the wall

又是古风歌词。。
虽然翻译得不错

统一回复一下：
可能我不太清楚大家关于古风的定义。在我看来，每行字数一样，结尾稍稍押个韵并不一定就是古风，最多只是我个人的强迫症而已。这个翻译的确用了很多四字词语，但句式上绝大部分是现代句式，唯一想到的是“何以”或者“君”这种犯了忌讳？
很多英文歌词都是押韵的，包括这一首，所以，如果每行字数翻得不一样，然后像流行歌曲一样押韵的话应该就没问题了吧？