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【月练】啊迷的第五期月练作业8.1-9.1

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  咱们恒是一粒粒     Each of us is
  酸酸的桔仔       A calamansi
  分不清         Wondering if
  生长的土地       The soil that nurtures us
  是故乡         Is native or alien.
  还是异乡
  想到祖先        Our fathers
  移植海外以前      Back in the old century
  原是甜蜜的       Were sweet
  而今已然一代酸过一代  Yet sour each passing generation.
  只不知         Shall we know
  子孙们         How much more sour
  将更酸涩        In taste
  成啥味道        The Children after us will be.



1楼2012-07-31 20:42回复


    调色 喜欢D1P


    2楼2012-07-31 20:43
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        在车马喧哗的街道
        在大厦与大厦之间
        坚持的翩翩翻飞,一只凤蝶
        依然舞姿轻逸
        色彩
        分明
        很爱屏神倾听
        树林的悄悄话,很爱
        闻那湿草场的气息
        很爱那宁谧的河岸
        开得一片遮地的繁花
        但原野已经消失
        楼房迅速的成长延伸
        在此翻飞,找不到花
        左右是墙壁
        上面是炽热的骄阳
        下面是焦灼的马路
        那些泛香的花呢?
        那些红玫瑰黄玫瑰
        蓝玫瑰呢?
      Hustle and bustle of traveling street
      Buildings and between buildings
      Adhere to the elegant swirls a Papilio
      Still dancing Lightness
      Color
      Distinct
      Love screen God listen
      Whispering of the woods, love
      Breath smell that wet grassland
      Love that serenity of the riverside
      Open a cover to the flowers
      But the wilderness has disappeared
      Building rapid growth extension
      This rippling can not find flowers
      Left and right wallsAbove is the hot sun
      Here is anxious roadThose
      Pan fragrant flowers?
      Those red roses,
      yellow roses
      Blue Rose do?
      我的蓝玫瑰呢 到哪里去了
      疯.


      5楼2012-07-31 20:50
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        1L和5L什么意思..


        6楼2012-07-31 21:44
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